Jump to content

taylp

Members
  • Posts

    1
  • Joined

  • Last visited

About taylp

taylp's Achievements

New member

New member (1/5)

0

Reputation

  1. Hey Matt.   Looked really good! Great opening shot, really grabbed me and made me want to pay attention.  The tempo was really nice too.    There was one shot at the 1:00minute mark that bothered me though.  The final shot we see the framing (IMO) is not good.  I see that you timed the final two punches with the music so the effect is somewhat sold, but I can't really see the main subject in the frame.  The lighting was really dark, and he was really pushed to the right side of the frame.  I think the final image of the reel needs to be very poignant and grabbing.  The final shot left me going "meh."  Try to make the final shot as good as your opening and you'll have a Bad a** reel. 
×
×
  • Create New...