Can anyone spot a mistake in this clip??

[Charlie]

This short clip is from a short I am editing.

I am wondering if anyone can spot anything about it that doesn't look right. I wont say what it could be, I want to know if you spot it.

Very interested to know since you all have a keen eye!!

Thanks!! 

[Grimor]

Maybe outside light colour not matching with man lighting.

[zerocool22]

Grading from first and third shot are off. On the left side there seems to be a building, but you cannot see it in the POV.

[Charlie]

The shot of the man was filmed in my apartment in Spain. The shot of the outside was filmed by a friend in the UK.

I am trying to match them as best as possible.

Any advice on how to make this work better?? 

[KrisAK]

The POV threw me...I though it was the perspective of someone looking AT his home. I think it's because his eyes are initially shut, and when he opens them appear to be looking down, while the POV is looking straight out. Maybe a close angle on the guy's face before cutting to the POV?

[PannySVHS]

 

@Charlie, Hey, thanks for the interesting post! The shot outside suggests to be a POV but it does not connect as a POV from the guy inside the building, as it does not seem he is actually looking outside of his window. Also there is nothing to see outside he might be seeking to see. You have other shots to connect to two? It seems to me, the outside shot is not necessary but might rather seem disrupt.