Matt Ferguson Posted August 7, 2013 Share Posted August 7, 2013 First time posting to the forum, but I wanted to get some feedback on my first demo reel. Been filming for about a year now, open to all constructive criticism: http://vimeo.com/71893833 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
taylp Posted August 8, 2013 Share Posted August 8, 2013 Hey Matt. Looked really good! Great opening shot, really grabbed me and made me want to pay attention. The tempo was really nice too. There was one shot at the 1:00minute mark that bothered me though. The final shot we see the framing (IMO) is not good. I see that you timed the final two punches with the music so the effect is somewhat sold, but I can't really see the main subject in the frame. The lighting was really dark, and he was really pushed to the right side of the frame. I think the final image of the reel needs to be very poignant and grabbing. The final shot left me going "meh." Try to make the final shot as good as your opening and you'll have a Bad a** reel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt Ferguson Posted August 15, 2013 Author Share Posted August 15, 2013 Thank you for the reply! I'll definitely keep that in mind for my next iteration of the reel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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