Short Film (noir) 'Lost in Noir'

[dwijip]

This was done couple of years ago. The whole thing was written, filmed and edited in about 3 weeks time so everything was in a rush.

 

Some shots are pretty bad, editing is not really all there and some cheesy dialogue.

I was embarrassed to show this to people so I didn't really put it out but I guess bad feed back is better than no feedback so here it is. Any comments are welcome thank you. 

 

Filmed on Canon 60D / Sigma 30mm f1.4 / Sigma 24-70mm f2.8 / Tokina 11-16mm f2.8 

 

 

[Axel]

Why do you think this is embarrassing?

 

Given that the actors are too young to be convincing, it's still a good job that shows a lot of talent, imo.

[Cosimo murgolo]

Why do you think this is embarrassing?

 

Given that the actors are too young to be convincing, it's still a good job that shows a lot of talent, imo.

that's true!!!! I fully agree!

[dwijip]

Why do you think this is embarrassing?

 

Given that the actors are too young to be convincing, it's still a good job that shows a lot of talent, imo.

 

that's true!!!! I fully agree!

 

Thank you~ you are both very kind. 

I think its a bit like painting, where sometimes when I see my old work,

I want to rip it off the wall but can't because I've already sold it to someone lol. 

 

Really good point about the actors actually. I think at that time I was guilty of working with an age group that I could 

feel comfortable in.