New short shot on Red Weapon

[Ed_David]

thanks - yes cinematography is a different way to communicate beyond words.

But being able to speak to the director in plain language is important too.  So I'm working on the speaking thing.  Thanks for putting up with my nonsense.

[Sekhar]

I wish the edit focused more on him. The way it is now, it seems more about her than the patient. Unless I'm missing something.

[Daniel Acuña]

Great short, the grading and the lighting feels a lot like the one from minority report, good stuff, even if I personally find that the grading is too extreme on some of the shots.

[AaronChicago]

I did not like the story, acting, and the editing so much. The Red cameras do look beautiful.

​You don't like alzheimers? Cool me either.

[Ed_David]

Good feedback - thanks guys.

I just shot it and also didn't edit it so I can't really talk to the film as content itself.  But the DP does sometimes has a say in performance - in this case, it's mostly visual so I guess I do take the fall for the performance

The edit - well I'm going to try a version for the DP cut that's faster and feels more like memories failing and breaking - I'm curious to see if that would change performance as well - would be a good test.

Thinking of "Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind" how that deals with memory and failing memory.  I love that film so much.